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Pledge of Allegiance

I pledge allegiance to the ideals of the United States of America,
And to the republic by which they are upheld,
One nation, indivisible, with liberty, opportunity, and justice for all.

It strikes me as backward that the citizens of my home country pledge allegiance first to a piece of cloth symbolizing the United States, second to the republic which is assumed to have liberty and justice for all. This promotes a kind of shallow patriotism for symbols and institutions which can easily be corrupted to become nationalism.

Our allegiance would be better placed with the ideals of liberty and justice and only secondarily to the republic of the United States. We have seen recently how the republic has been perverted. The executive branch uses the authoritarian tactics of ubiquitous surveillance, torture, restriction of liberty, and so forth in the name of public security. The republic itself is only a tool to promote liberty and justice. When that tool fails to fulfill its purpose, we are duty-bound to either reform the tool or, if that proves impossible, to discard it in favor another tool which will serve our purposes. I hope that the adapted pledge above embodies well placed allegiance.

I am sure many religious readers will be upset by the omission of the words “under God”. They may perceive this as an attack on the religious values of the people of the United States. The reality is that this is the opposite of the truth. Our great nation was founded by men who were wise enough to create a separation between the religious and political powers. This protects the church from the tyranny and corruption of the state, and the state from undue influence by the church. Our Founding Fathers created a secular state (i.e. a state with no power to discourage or promote religion) in order to protect the free exercise of its citizens’ consciences. Removing the words “under God” is an acknowledgment of the wisdom of the Founding Fathers in creating a secular state where the people are free to be Christian, Jew, Muslim, Buddhist, Hindu, to have no religion at all, or whatever else their consciences may dictate without the threat of state oppression.

Additionally, the words “under God” were only added in the middle of the 20th century. The pledge of allegiance hasn’t contained that language for over half of its history. Removing the religious language in the current pledge is a correction, reverting it to its original, secular state.

The adaptation quoted at the beginning of this post was intended to preserve the familiar cadence of the current pledge. It should be easy to recite this adaptation in place of the current pledge. The following adaptation however is more in line with what I see as the ideal pledge, but it doesn’t have the same singsong rhythm we learned as schoolchildren. I prefer it anyway because it embodies more closely what I think is great about the United States of America.

I pledge allegiance to the ideals of liberty, opportunity, and justice for all;
And to the republic by which they are upheld,
One nation, indivisible, a home for the noble free.

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16 Comments

  1. cybr said,

    June 19, 2007 @ 9:05 pm

    I don’t recall anything about separation of church and state in the US Constitution. However, I do believe it does state that there shall not be a state established religion. There is a difference.

    Many of our current laws are based from religious belief. Not to say we could not have come to those same laws without religion, but that religion has nonetheless been an influence. Could a person one hundred percent disregard everything he/she has learned from religious study?

    Amendment 1 – Right of Religion & Expression
    ”Congress shall make no law respecting an establishment of religion, or prohibiting the free exercise thereof; or abridging the freedom of speech, or of the press;or the right of the people peaceably to assemble, and to pettion the Government for a redress of grievances.”

  2. Kullervo said,

    June 20, 2007 @ 5:13 am

    “I don’t recall anything about separation of church and state in the US Constitution.”

    Blah blah blah ad nauseum. That’s the lamest argument ever, and it shows you know basically absollutely nothing about real Constitutional law.

    Over 200 years of the Supreme Court interpreting the Constitution says that nevertheless there is a fundamental separation of Church and State in the Constitution. Plus, check out the Federalist Papers, where the phrase definitely is included. Now, I realize that the Federalist Papers aren’t binding or anything, but they do give you an idea of what the guys who wrote the Constitution meant when they wrote it, and how they explained it to all the people who were ratifying it.

    And a purely textual approach doesn’t even work, since it’s not really possible- the Constitution is purposely vague and written in broad terms, in order to function and be flexible as the supreme law of the land.

    How would you combine Church and State without it respecting an establishment of religion, or prohibiting the free exercise thereof? It doesn’t even make sense.

    “Many of our current laws are based from religious belief.”

    Again, a commonly cited pure BS argument, that mostly shows that you don’t even understand what law is, much less where laws come from and which ones were motivated by which considerations.

    Could a person one hundred percent disregard everything he/she has learned from religious study?”

    Of course not, and that would be completely ridiculous. However, that actually has nothing to do with separation of Church and State. It’s completely irrelevant to the separation of Church and State. And if someone ever says that separation of Church and State means that policymakers, office-holders and voters, are supposed to ignore their religious convictions when making decisions, that person doesn’t understand Constitutional law any more than you do.

    But changing the pledge of allegiance, by statute, to include “one nation under God” most certainly is an example of Congress making a law that establishes religion.

  3. Jonathan Blake said,

    June 20, 2007 @ 7:55 am

    There are some good quotes which show what some of the writers of the Constitution thought about how religion and government should interact.

    When I wrote this post, my main intent wasn’t to remove the “under God” phrase, but while I was at it, I figured I might as well do it. Isn’t it ironic how many Mormons defend religious influence on government? Given Mormon history with government’s interference with polygamy you would think they would be in the vanguard of defending church and state separation. Then again, Joseph Smith and Brigham Young both wanted a theocracy.

    Any suggestions on how to better revise the pledge?

  4. cybr said,

    June 20, 2007 @ 10:55 pm

    I pledge allegiance to the United States of America,
    and to the ideas for which it stand,
    one indivisible nation,
    with liberty and justice for all.

    “I am persuaded no constitution was never before as well calculated as ours for extensive empire and self-government.” – Thomas Jefferson to James Madison, April 27, 1809

    “The prosperity…The splendour, and…the duration of the Empire.” – Adam Smith, 1754

    “The day is within my time…when we may say by what laws other nations shall treat us upon the sea. And we shall say it.” – Thomas Jefferson, 1801

    “This form of government [The Constitution], in order to effect its purposes, must operate not within a small but an extensive sphere. – James Madison to Thomas Jefferson, 1787

    Yes, pledge allegiance to the very nation. The US is an empire. Spawned of an empire. And to this day illustrated by this nations imperialistic actions in expansion and intervention. We can discuss all we want about how ‘the pledge’ should be worded, and whether or not it should include ‘under God’. But the fact of the matter is, it doesn’t matter. We may call our selves a republic, but we are an empire and always have been. And, it won’t make a difference what ‘the people’ truly want. Our government only gives us the illusion that we govern the government.

    Kullervo, your absolutely right. As I’ve stated in many of my previous postings, I’m rather idiotic. It finally took someone to agree with me. I must not have one iota of intelligence when it comes to understanding anything. So, it continues to become obvious to me that I have nothing worthwhile to contribute to society. And especially to a one sided discussion, which I lack the intelligence to participate in. I’ll recede to my dark abyss and bother you no more with my vague and useless religious rhetoric. Obviously god must no exist, or else I am a sadistic toy of its design.

    Jon, since I obviously make no real contribution here, please delete my previous posts. Except perhaps this one that my remains may still be mocked in my absence.

  5. Kullervo said,

    June 21, 2007 @ 6:55 am

    Your only response is exaggerated sarcasm? That’s all you’ve got?

    Well, cybr, if all you’re going to do is rehash a tired uninformed argument with no real grounding in the Constitution or Constitutional law and that basically amounts to a platitude, then yes, you don’t have much to contribute. You’re a parrot, and you’re not even parroting something with analytical weight.

    Come on. If you want to wade into Constitutional law and argue with people who know what they’re talking about, you’re going to need to do better than that.

    On the other hand, if you actually do know what you’re talking about (which is entirely possible), then back it up with something other than worn-out tracks from the Religious Right’s Greatest Hits album played on repeat.

    By the way, that line about the “extensive sphere” is probably taken out of context- they’re probably talking about “extending the sphere,” which is a concept from the Federalist Papers (I don’t remember which one) that basically means that in order for the Constitution’s checks and balances to operate, the scale has to encompass all of American society so that small factions can’t dominate.

    the quote from Adam Smith is irrelevant, since it’s dated twenty years before the Declaration of Independence and it was written by an economist, not one of the Founding Fathers or anything.

    And in light of the fact that pretty much every country in the world is a party to the Law of the Sea Convention despite the fact that we have refrained sort of makes Thomas Jefferson’s sea-prophecy a little dubious. And anyway, that has more to do with international law than anything else, and that’s a whole different kettle o’ fish.

  6. Jonathan Blake said,

    June 21, 2007 @ 8:01 am

    Jon, since I obviously make no real contribution here, please delete my previous posts. Except perhaps this one that my remains may still be mocked in my absence.

    I really don’t want to have to do that. I would much rather preserve your contributions to the discussions here. You have to decide if your participation here is doing anything for you. I can understand why a religious person would find this an inhospitable place, especially given the usual deference religion is given in everyday society. I don’t plan to give religious superstitions any quarter here. At the same time, I want to hear from the religious point of view to keep me honest. That’s why, for example, I’m currently reading A History of God.

    This will perhaps sound cheesy (when has that stopped me before?), but I really want to get to the truth here. That’s why I have this blog. This search requires humility, which I define as the strength to look at things as they are. If I am full of crap, I hope to get smacked down.

    Let me emphasize, however, that I don’t appreciate ad hominem attacks. This discussion has gotten a little personal: one of us attacking the other’s abilities, and the other playing the martyr. Why don’t we just get back to the discussion without the distractions, eh?

    Besides, if I am not mistaken, Kullervo is a first year law student (second year now?), so I’m glad I’m on his side this time. I personally wouldn’t want to cross swords with him regarding the law. Computer engineering would be another matter. ;) Unfortunately, that topic doesn’t come up in conversation much.

    I like your version of the pledge. Obviously not what I find ideal, but I think it’s an improvement over what we’ve got. I can understand the desire to have people pledge allegiance to the state, though I would like to make it contingent on the state upholding the ideals. My first allegiance lies with the ideals.

  7. Kullervo said,

    June 21, 2007 @ 8:23 am

    I might have gotten too nasty and personal, and I apologize for that. I get really frustrated though, arguing with people about the Constitution and the law when it turns out that most people (generally on both sides of a given argument) have no idea what they’re talking about. And they’re generally certain that they do know what they’re talking about. The more I actually learn about the law, the more maddening it gets.

  8. Jonathan Blake said,

    June 21, 2007 @ 9:15 am

    I think that goes for every specialist, though I can imagine it’s worse for lawyers. I think there’s a misapprehension that the basics of the law are easily comprehensible. They seem comprehensible which leads us to think we know the law, but we don’t. I listened in on my wife’s online lectures about Common Law and about the rules of evidence. The law is very detailed. Movie courtroom dramas do little to educate you about the subtleties of the idea of fruit of the poisoned tree, for example.

    My personal pet peeve about the law is that we’ve created a system where we’re responsible for knowing the law, but it is impossible for any one person to comprehend all of it. I almost wax nostalgic for the days when you could post the entire code of law on a stone in a public square, almost. :)

  9. His Sexy Wife said,

    June 21, 2007 @ 5:59 pm

    I think you learned more from that Criminal Justice class than I did.
    :)

  10. mel said,

    June 21, 2007 @ 10:51 pm

    How about:

    I will endeavor to support and promote the ideals of my country,
    so long as no better ideals come along,
    and so long as such ideals do not contradict the ideal of common human good
    and so long as such ideals do not fail to flourish the human biosphere.

    Seriously, why do we have a pledge of allegiance at all? It’s a solemn promise of loyalty — whether to symbol, republic, or to ideas … such promises are meant to be abused, ignored, or broken, and the result in each case is the debasement of the human mind.

    Attaching “god” to it was just an escalation of an already very bad idea.

    Kullervo, is it safe to conjecture that the “Pledge of Allegiance” was already extra-constitutional before adding god made it unconstitutional?

  11. Jonathan Blake said,

    June 21, 2007 @ 11:40 pm

    Sexy Wife,

    I don’t know if that’s really true, but it was interesting to listen over your shoulder once in a while.

    Mel,

    Your version struck me as the opposite of the Universal Declaration of Human Rights from the United Nations. After mouthing a bunch of ideals, Article 29(3) states “These rights and freedoms may in no case be exercised contrary to the purposes and principles of the United Nations.” Sounds pretty ominous. Shouldn’t the purposes of the UN only ever be to promote those human rights? Of course I realize that the UN doesn’t really serve the people of the world but rather its member nations.

  12. Jonathan Blake said,

    June 21, 2007 @ 11:43 pm

    I forgot to say I think allegiance to ideals is important. It can provide guidance in uncertain times and prevent us from making shortsighted mistakes.

  13. mel said,

    June 21, 2007 @ 11:50 pm

    But do such ideals really require a promise of loyalty with hand over heart and repeated before a flag by school children daily? Last I checked only mindless dogma required such brainwashing and god-oathing to enforce its authority.

    Good ideas, really good ideas spread like wildfire and are not soon forgotten or betrayed — not without lots of contrary brainwashing that is …

  14. Jonathan Blake said,

    June 22, 2007 @ 12:01 am

    Point taken. I agree we shouldn’t drum the thing into our children’s heads. The more I delve into the idea of freethinking, the more I see how harmful dogmatic thinking can be. A set oath of allegiance, no matter how open-minded, is fodder for the dogma-creator.

  15. mel said,

    June 22, 2007 @ 12:20 am

    Your observations about the UN (an extension of American power or castrated without America, I would add) are right on. And I had to laugh when I very soon after came upon this post linking to a video of The Decemberists’ “16 Military Wives”. It’s a must see follow-on to your UN comments.

    Enjoy.

  16. Kullervo said,

    June 22, 2007 @ 5:49 am

    16 Military Wives is a great song with an awesome video.

    As far as the Pledge goes, hmm. I’m not sure. Off the top of my head, I can’t think of what constitutional grounds Congress would have had to pass 4 U.S.C. section 4, but even if it’s not constitutional, it’s the kind of unconstitutional law that you can’t really do anything about since virtually nobody would have standing to challenge it in court.

    The addition of “under God” is a different story, but as of yet, the Supreme Court has done its darndest to avoid ruling on the subject, for lots of reasons that I can sympathize with.

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